Answer 1: the parcel room, in general terms (about level 6)
Sample survey response (153 words, inside the 150–200 range)
I choose Option A, the parcel room.
First, many people in our building order things online. When the parcels come, nobody is at home because they are at work. So the courier leave the parcel in the lobby and sometimes it is lost. This is a big problem. The parcel room will fix this problem because the parcels will be safe.
Second, the parcel room is good for everybody. Not everybody has a bike, but everybody gets parcels. Old people also get parcels, for example groceries and gifts for their grandchildren. So more people can use it.
Also the bike room is good idea, but people can keep the bike on the balcony or in the apartment. It is not so big problem.
In conclusion, I think the parcel room is better for our building because the parcels will be safe and all people can use it. Thank you for asking residents opinion.
| Dimension | Estimated level | Why |
|---|---|---|
| Content/Coherence | 6 | A clear choice and two relevant reasons, but they stay general (many people, everybody), and the first one repeats itself. |
| Vocabulary | 6 | Basic words used again and again (problem, parcel, good), with few precise ones. |
| Readability | 6 | Short, simple sentences and noticeable errors (the courier leave, is good idea, not so big problem, residents opinion), though the meaning stays clear. |
| Task Fulfillment | 7 | A clear choice, a polite closing and 153 words, but the second reason and the look at the other option are thin. |
| Overall | About level 6 | The rounded average of the four, as Prepiva’s rating computes it |
What would raise it:
- Replace general claims with one real example, as Answer 2 does.
- Use more precise words than problem and good.
- Fix the grammar: the courier leaves, a good idea, not such a big problem, residents’ opinions.
- Join short sentences with because, while or which.