Sample email: applying for a market table (about level 9)
Your town’s Saturday farmers’ market is looking for new vendors for the summer season. You make jams and pickles at home and have sold them at a school fair, and you would like a table at the market. The market coordinator is Ms. Duval.
Write an email of about 150–200 words to Ms. Duval. In your email, do these three things:
- Introduce yourself and describe the products you would sell.
- Explain why your products would suit the market.
- Ask two questions about the rules for vendors.
Sample email (192 words, inside the 150–200 range)
Dear Ms. Duval,
I saw your notice in the community newsletter that the Saturday farmers’ market is looking for new vendors, and I would like to apply for a table this summer.
My name is Lena Kowalski, and I have been making preserves in my own kitchen for about ten years. I would sell four kinds of jam, including a strawberry-rhubarb jam that sold out at my children’s school fair in May, as well as two kinds of dill pickles made from my grandmother’s recipe.
I believe my products would suit the market well. Almost all of my fruit and cucumbers come from farms within an hour of town, so customers would be supporting local growers twice. My jars are also small and easy to carry, which matters to shoppers who walk to the market.
I have two questions about the rules for vendors. First, do I need a food safety certificate to sell preserves, or is a kitchen inspection enough? Second, does the market provide tables, or should I bring my own table and tent?
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Lena Kowalski
| Dimension | Estimated level | Why |
|---|---|---|
| Content/Coherence | 9 | Each point has its own paragraph and specific support: ten years of making preserves, a jam that sold out at a school fair, farms within an hour of town. |
| Vocabulary | 9 | Words that fit the situation exactly (preserves, vendors, local growers), used naturally rather than to impress. |
| Readability | 9 | Clear paragraphs, helpful links (First, Second, also, so) and a mix of simple and complex sentences without errors. |
| Task Fulfillment | 10 | All three points in the prompt’s order, two real questions for the third point, a formal tone for a coordinator the writer has never met, and 192 words. |
| Overall | About level 9 | The rounded average of the four, as Prepiva’s rating computes it |
What would raise it:
- Vary the sentence openings: several sentences start with I or My.
- Add one more precise detail to the paragraph on why the products suit the market, such as how the jars are labelled, to move toward level 10.